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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

Fantastic writing! The dialogue is fast-paced, and the descriptions detailed without dragging. I'm ready for Part 2!

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Darius McCall's avatar

We are glad you liked it, Katharine!

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Compelling characters and snappy dialog, Darius. You got me hooked.

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melgicraft's avatar

I read all Dummy's dialogues in an irish tone. Feck yeh!

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Darius McCall's avatar

Toern, you are scaring me right now.

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