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waxeshi's avatar

Damn. I really want to know what happens on the scenes in between. When is the novel dropping?

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Zani D's avatar

HoH representation!? FUCK YES

So here for this.

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Oh, now, I really want to know what happens next. A brilliant hook!

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alex b.'s avatar

This got my attention and I can feel the tension. Very nice Darius!

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Grant Murray's avatar

I really want to start reading one of your stuff man, just super busy haha. But I think I can squeeze in some time this weekend!

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Darius McCall's avatar

Glad to hear that Grant. More are coming, stay tuned!

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The Verdant Butterfly's avatar

This piece absolutely crackled with energy. The way Sin weaponized silence and movement, pure artistry. I could see every expression and shift like it was happening on a stage. That final smirk? Chef’s kiss. Thank you for sharing this, it's unforgettable

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Fantastic descriptive writing makes this scene come alive, Darius. Excellent!

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